by LeisaWatkins » Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:00 pm
I have high speed internet and it did load a little slow for me.
I do like the colors.
As far as a few tips...
You have "How Can I Become a Millionaire" followed by Make Money at Home...Then it goes into info about Stuart Goldsmith. It tells me nothing about how I could make money at home. You need much more compelling content on the front page.
Your front page should contain more about what you are offering. It took me several clicks to realize that you were offering books. But I get an impression that you are offering more than that. But what? What's the inner circle? Are you wanting people to order the books, join the inner circle, or order the free report first?
What ever it is that you want people to do first should be on that front page.
I guess I am just saying there isn't a clear call to action and enough compelling info on the front page.
I don't know what I am joining if I click on the Make Money at Home! Join Team Goldsmith link unless I explore the other pages first. A user would need the info first to make a decision.
Hope that helps.
~ Leisa