by Les » Wed Dec 05, 2007 11:38 am
Joe,
Some constructive observations - just my opinion so don't be offended (I bet most people's first sites weren't too good.)
Difficult to read - scrap the orange font and black background. Black text on a white or very light background will be more readable.
Keep the logo and star bursts.
Scrap the scrolling 'thing'.
Write a headline that grabs the readers eyeballs, example - "One Call And It's Cleared - Yep! We're That Quick".
Change the copy (wording) on the home page. At present it's mostly about the company. Make it about the prospective customer and how he benefits by using you. Top of the head example - Unlike others we're a family business, so you won't suffer from shoddy sub-contractors work. And because we're family, we won't treat your home like a building site.
Not many other dumpster businesses can offer you one low price AND stick to it - you'll never be charged for hidden extras.
One more thing, optimize your pictures so they load faster.
Hope this helps.
Les