can i get a critic?
Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 8:02 pmAaron, the biggie is that it's not immediately clear to me what you do.
CustomerManager.com is a good descriptive name... but I don't see how that has anything to do with your headline, "If You Accept Payments Through PayPal, Get Ready For a Profit EXPLOSION!"
And your stop/go "Stop Working Harder!" and "Start Working Smarter!" headlines take up room on prime territory of your website without really telling me anything. I think a statement of what you do (sort of like your mission statement, but more specific and more "you-focused") should go there instead.
ALso, I suggest you make your webpages resizable; (e.g. width="100%" instead of width=900); otherwise your whole page isn't seen on computers with browser resolution set to say 800 x 600.
Nice start!
Diana Ratliff
http://www.bizbooklets.com
Shouldn't your business card work as hard as YOU do?