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Sales page help please
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Tue Jun 30, 2009 12:35 pm
by sherrinc
review
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Fri Jul 03, 2009 2:21 pm
by painternc
1) my opinion - there are way too many - camping- it doesn't read naturally. I was distracted cause I was thinking - the reason the word caping is used over and over is to get good SEO rating - but it distracted me.
2) Isn't it always good to start out with a question(s) Do your kids beg you for outdoor adventure but all you can think about is the hassle? I don't know what are some other questions you could come up with that people think about when they're getting ready to go camping?
Maybe include one of the recipes from the book in your copy.
I don't know - try lowering your price - use Lynn's Fast Cash Strategy of $10
Nan
Posted:
Sat Jul 04, 2009 11:01 am
by Adrian Jock
sales page review
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Sat Jul 04, 2009 1:24 pm
by painternc
Re: sales page review
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Sat Jul 04, 2009 1:34 pm
by Adrian Jock
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Sat Jul 04, 2009 4:15 pm
by sherrinc
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Sat Jul 04, 2009 4:36 pm
by painternc
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Sat Jul 04, 2009 8:30 pm
by angienewton
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Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:57 am
by sherrinc
Thanks Angie!
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 4:58 am
by onlineleben
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Wed Jul 08, 2009 2:46 pm
by sherrinc
I was wondering if I should add another order button so thanks for confirming that. I made that change and "beefed up" my copy by adding an excerpt from the guide like I did with the recipes.
I appreciate your help!
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:12 am
by onlineleben
Sherri,
just checked your site again.
I would put an order button just above "Introductory Offer: $27.00 $17.00 which ..." because there the visitor sees a price and can make a decision if the price justifies the benefits he has just read about.
Good to see that you have put some cosmetics around your guarantee - looks good now, except that the text following it: "Yes Sandy, I'm ..." is not below the guarantee but starts besides it.
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Thu Jul 09, 2009 9:42 am
by sherrinc