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What makes a good travel sales page?

I am interested in getting some feedback on the following page, which aims to elicit interest in Business Travel to China.



The html is very basic, so what main modifications would you all suggest?
What about the sales copy? What could be added or subtracted?

Thanks to everyone for constructive suggestions.

This is an interesting offer/opportunity. I dont imagine it would be hard to sell 10 spots!

Here are a few basic suggestions you can start with:

1) Make your page resizable so that it looks right in all resolutions. It is currently too wide for 800x600 res and the words go off the right side of the page for those people. You can use percentage instead of pixels, or set your max width at around 785 pixels.

2) You link directly to PayPal instead of using an order button. How are they supposed to know which address to send the money to? Go into your paypal account and set up an Order button and place the code on your site instead of a text link.

3) Focus on your Call to Action. Your order link is tiny compared to all of the other text on your page. Make it easy to find - make it stand out.

4) Your current headline is:

“Your Profit Opportunity
Is Here…
Import Direct from China!”

You want to address your target market in the headline. I am not a copywriter, but here is a suggestion to work from:

"Learn How YOU Can Start Importing Products Directly
From China and Resell Them With Huge Profit Margins!"


Those four things will be a great start - and I am sure others here can offer their suggestions & input as well