Do you have a one-minute “Business Infomercial?”

[SkinCareGirl]

Do you have a one-minute “Business Infomercial?”

Here is a guideline to help you plan your infomercial.
http://www.gwin.ca/media/article_images ... ercial.pdf

Here's mine. I feel it needs some work. Input/advice?
Thanks!
Leslie

Did you know for more than 40 years, Mary Kay products have earned the loyalty of millions of customers? That’s because Mary Kay products meet the highest standards of safety, quality and performance.

Are you concerned about the visible signs of aging? Being a skin care consultant I can find the right products for you "to turn back time" and educate you on what a good skin care system can do for you.

Women and men of all ages are concerned about the visible signs of aging which include fine lines and wrinkles, and the loss of skin firmness and elasticity. Baby boomers want to fight the signs of aging, while younger women want to delay them. For best results, be sure to ask me what products will work best for you.

[Warren Contreras]

Are you sure you can say all that in one minute? To be honest, after the first few lines my eyes glazed over, so I don't think hearing it would work on me, but then I'm not a woman either.

I prefer a 10 second Infomercial so I don't lose their interest.

Hey do you have the Internet at home and a little extra time?

Could you learn to give away free money with no catches? If you can, I'll show you how to get paid for doing it, no kidding.

Then I send them to a special website I set up to do the explaining when they are more inclined to pay attention on their own schedule.

[SkinCareGirl]

OK, I probably shouldn't have said one minute.
My post would have been 10 pages long. lol
I want to have something to say at a networking event...to introduce myself and my company/products.


Warren, I like yours, but some times people think "scam" when they hear or read "learn to give away free money with no catches." I think yeah right, this is too good to be true. No offense, just my thoughts.

Leslie

[Warren Contreras]

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